I really, really want the story of Mary Ann (I know that's not her name, but it's all I've got to call her)!
Was I just praising this for the lack of romance?
Spoke too soon apparently.
"That's okay," I said gently. "I don't think I'll ever be normal either."
Slow middle part...is slow
Though I have to say the romance isn't a romance. I'm seriously curious about where this is going - I just want it to get going.